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An Analysis of the Poem "You're"

By: Sharon White

When your eyes first rest on the title, “You’re”, your first thought is that the writer is talking about someone other than herself. Actually it seems that the writer is going to proceed and describe you! But on reading the poem you realize that it is really an abstract poem, she never really states who she is talking to.

The poem is divided into two stanzas, each with nine lines exactly. It
is a short yet thorough poem. I noticed that Plath has once again used
nine lines in each stanza, as she did in "Tulips", and nine is known
to be a death number. So once we look at this poem we could relate it
with death once again, that is without reading it. The poem's form is
rather regular, as the lines are all equal and this creates a very
parallel plain effect.

The opening line of the poem is kind of confusing. It is a simile, it
says, "clown like, happiest on your hands", sometimes clowns are
related with evilness. Personally they give me the creeps; on the
other hand they are happy and joyous. When she says 'happiest on your
hands, feet to the stars", I picture one doing a handstand. So the
clown was probably meant in a good way, doing a trick. "Gilled like a
fish", once again is a simile, which suggests that the way this
'person' breathes is very soft like a small fish. Fish have small
gills, and therefore this could mean that the person is young. They have soft gestures and actions.

The poem goes on with a metaphor, comparing this individual with a
"dodo" bird. Whilst doing the handstand their thumbs are down like a
dodo bird does. A dodo sometimes is used to describe someone 'stupid',
in this context it could mean the person is not and therefore stupid
to the outside world. It then goes on to describe this person further
with another simile, "wrapped up in yourself like a spool", suggests
that this person is in their own world and doesn't have a care in the
world. Also she was depressed and depressed people are often within
themselves. This could also mean she was talking about herself.

The next line is related to the previous one "mute as a turnip", this
person is within himself or she they are so quiet like a turnip, and
turnips have no feelings or emotions. This is also a simile and this
person is constantly quiet, because she says from the "fourth of July
to All Fools Day". This subsequent line gives me the impression that
she is talking about one of her children because she says "O high
riser, my little loaf." She possibly referred to one of her children
as her "little loaf".

This now brings me to the second stanza of the poem. This stanza is
also full of similes. "Vague as fog and looked for like mail",
suggests that this person was very hard to speak to and to relate to,
and they were so far away "Farther off than Australia." This human
being was still small like a "bud" and hardly noticed like a "sprat in
a pickle jug". This person is very ductile they are like a "clean
slate", which could easily be broken.

The poem does not have a rhyme, or a rhythm. The tone is very happy at
first with the 'clown' but goes on to being lonely as she describes
this person's distinctiveness.

This now brings me to my conclusion. I personally did not enjoy this
poem. To me there was a very sinister and empty feeling, which made me
very depressed. It was very descriptive with all the use of similes
and metaphors.

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The article was produced by the writer of masterpapers.com. Sharon White is a senior writer and writers’ consultant in UK dissertation writing. Get some useful tips for Dissertation service and title page for research

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